同等学力写作评分标准及其范例(2)

评卷实例：The Goal of Life （共有3篇范文）

范文之一

After reading this instructive story, we can learn that there is no go goal, there is no life, and we should set new goals for life in different periods of life. Otherwise sad story such as the disabled man mentioned in the story would happen. Only with the renewed goals, we can improve ourselves step by step, and make our life more colorful and meaningful.

Certainly, everyone has his own goal of life. I have mine too. My goal is to become a famous surgeon. I’ll work hard to achieve this goal by learning and practicing more, so that I can make myself more knowledgeable and skillful, and use them to benefit my patients. If I have achieved this goal, I would set up a new one. Then, I’ll do my best to achieve it.

Therefore, everyone should set different goals in different periods of life, and try his best to achieve it. In this way, we will live happily.

范文之二
After reading the story, I have learned from it that there was disabled English man who had climbed all the famous mountains before he was 28 years old and then he killed himself. Why did he kill himself ? The answer is that he had accomplish his goal that his parents asked him to do so . So he felt that he had no new goal in his life.

I, myself, am a doctor. Therefore my goal is to cure patients. When I see my patients suffering from one disease or another, I am feeling very miserable and sympathetic. Then I try my best to help them and make them recover soon. Life is beautiful, nobody has the right to make them suffering or deprive them of their right to enjoy life. So I am determined to help my patients recover.

From the first day I stepped into hospital and became a doctor, I have cured thousands of thousands of patients. Seeing their healthy smiling faces, I feel very happy. However, this isn’t enough, because there are many diseases which are incurable, such as AIDS. Therefore, there are a lot of goals for me to achieve . I will devote all my life energy to the great cause of medicine.

范文之三
There is a story that talks about a young British man who has little-ill body climb all the famous mountains before the age of twenty-eight by his own courage. In our mind, he was a brave man, but to our surprised, he finished his won life at twenty-right, because he said that all things he had done, there is now new goal in his life.

From this story, we conclusion that man must have goal of life. If we have no goal of life. We will do nothing in our life, the only thing we did is wasting the time. On the other hand, if we finished our goal of life, we should make a new goal of life. Otherwise, we will like the young man of the story.

My goal of life is to finish my social value. Do my best to help others. And enjoy the life. I think my goal of life won’t be achieved because there are so many people who need help. I will to my best to achieve that goal of life.

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